Hey, this is Classic Autumn 15, aka Rebel's, profile page. But you all proably already knew that. Anyways, I want to be an author one day, so I really need everyone's criticism to make me a better author. In the mean time though, I'm going to give everyone my opinion on what shoulde never be done is books. Ready? Ok.

The Don't of Writing Fiction

Don't:

Make your characters stupid. And when I say that I don't mean that they can't say really blonde things from time to time. I mean that I think it is a real turn off on books when the character always says and does stupid things. I really really hate that.

Make one group of people fall for another group of people. That is another thing I can't stand, because it is so unrealistic. I mean honestly, how many people do you know fall in actual love with the best friend of the guy that your best friend is married to? Count how many time, it won't be that many.

Make all of your couples come from inside the same school. HELLO! There are other schools out their use your imagination, and not the simple way to hook people together.

Cuss so much that your readersfeel like they have to take a bath after reading two lines of your story. I'm not a huge fan of cuss words, I admit that. But cussing a little bit, and cussing every other word is a HUGE difference.

My Stories

Hogg'in, A History

I really wanted this story to go somewhere, but I am really stuck and don't know where to turn. See the orriginal plan was to have like a second generation of Marauders, but I fell for the eaisest trap in the book, I rushed. I rushed into raw feelings before anyone got to actually know the characters, I rushed into a relationship that didn't really add up that much. Then I got board. I didn't want to write about the characters life or anything. It's really sad, I know. But I proabably won't go anywhere with the story.

To Be A Marauder's Child

This is something that I just put up, but I have had the idea brewing in my head for a long time now. It is about six 17 year-olds: Harry James Potter (Pride/ Ace), Tristan Yered Black (Tris/ Ty), Dillion Orlando Kilner (Dill/ US), Felicity Irissa Everwood (Flick/ Firefly), Sailor Andralyn Black (Say/ Talon), and Meghan (Meg/ Camera). All of them are from the future, and have gone back to 1986 to stop Voldemort before he takes to many lives durring his first rage, which end up meaning that there is no wizarding world. Here are how the relationships work:

Harry and Felicity know each other and can barely stand each others company;but they will definately (althougheventually) fall in love.

Felicity (Albus'sgreat-something grand daughter) is best friends with Tristan and Sailor, because they grew up in the same American orphanage.

Tristan (guy) and Sailor (girl) are twins. Sirius didn't know of their existance, and their mom didn't want them and left them to die in a downtrodened houe that was lit aflame.

Sailor found Meghan trapped in the clutches of Voldemort, and offered to help; thus they became friends. (Remus didn't know about Meghan'sbirth either. Her mother died in child birth.)

Meghan knew that there was a prisioner, besiders herself, that was in danger of being Voldemorts next victim, and convinced Tristan and Sailor to help her find the guy. The guys name was Dillion.

Dillion knew Harry from way back when they were kids, as their parents were killed on the same night, and they lived across the street from one another, and even when to the same school until Dillion took the fall for a prank that Harry and him pulled when they were 8 (Harry couldn't stop him because he was locked in his cupboard). The prank was pulled on this really arrogant and irratatingly perfect guy, but Felicity, while trying to figure out what they were up to, stepped on a delicate part of the prank before it was complete, and it nearly got her seriously injured.

The relationship between Felicity and Harry is really complex and involves a lot of past wounds, half of which have no reason at all. But half of the half that do have something like reason behind them are made from fear of hurting each other again. Like I said, it's complex.

The girls in the story will be introduced in later chapters, first I wan't to focus on the guys, since it is Harry's idea.