I joined since I love writing fanfics.

Been writing for years, even before I joined. The ones from before I joined are not good enough to be posted here and the ones from 2012 and before are not quite good enough either, the vultures circling around looking for bad fanfics will surely swoop down and have a feast!

As a writer striving to improve, I greatly appreciate constructive criticism, even if it is harsh as long as it is constructive. The following is what I need help with most-

Description- I used to not describe a long time ago but I got flamed and bashed on a level that one would expect if someone trivialized stuff. So now I describe. But sometimes I worry I over-describe out of fear of not describing enough. Since if one over-describes, it can slow down the story. This is a major trouble spot, along with dialogue, would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism regarding description.

Dialogue- due to being completely deaf, I have to use a cochlear implant to hear and it fluctuates in quality, which means I can’t read my dialogue out loud like many hearing people can. Since the fluctuations would affect how I hear dialogue, could make good dialogue sound bad and vice versa. To overcome this, I read it out loud in my head. In addition, sometimes I have struggles with self-confidence regarding dialogue. Like with description, would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism regarding dialogue.

Pacing- sometimes I am not sure if the pacing is too fast or too slow.

Keeping canon characters in-character- sometimes I worry (and sometimes worry too much and overthink) too much on trying to keep characters in-character. I have had bad past experiences with people being, like with the description, so hateful even though I never had them do horrible things they wouldn’t do.

Making sure things make sense- this goes in hand with the above stuff in general. I sometimes end up overthinking it when it comes to trying new things and it ends up bringing things to a halt. But the only way to improve is through trial and error, since trying out new things does come with risks but the reward can be great.

My top six favorite series-

1. Mass Effect

2. Naruto

3. Halo

4. Overwatch

5. Star Wars

6. Harry Potter

Ongoing series- any fics not listed here are stand-alone.

The Cherry Blossom and the Angara Universe- Alternate Timeline - Milky Way

1. Return

The Cherry Blossom and the Angara Universe- Alternate Timeline 1-

1. Loss

2. Rofjinn

3. Strength in the Face of Fear

4. After Meridian

5. Love in Another Galaxy

6. Angaran Mother's Day

The Cherry Blossom and the Angara Universe- Alternate Timeline 2-

1. Standing Strong and Staying Clear Together

The Cherry Blossom and the Angara universe- Alternate Timeline 3-

1. Blue Cherry Blossoms

Andromeda Prompt Fics- These are stand-alone unless otherwise noted

1. What Allies are For

2. Cave of Horrors

3. Exaltation

4. Nightmares

5. The Night Before the Battle

6. War for Extermination

7. Shadow of Uncertainty

8. Love-struck on Aya

9. A Love-struck Pathfinder

10. Hero of the Heleus Cluster

11. Hanging On

12. En Route

13. Desperate Collaboration

14. The Power of Perseverance

15. The Power of Love

16. Too Close

17. Preparations

18. Saved by Pathfinder

19. Healing and Love

20. Love is Love

21. Backlash

22. Guarding Love.

23. Tragic Monsters

24. After Training

25. Eons

26. Turned

Five Days of Halloween- three fics, with one having three chapters, and one post per day from 10/27 to 10/30 of 2019-

1. Enslaved

2. Troubled Sleep

3. Always Close