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I just want all readers to know I will be sending an idea of mine for a Naruto fic to these 15 writers in case I lose interest in writing. Its for a dream team and I hope the aurthos let this team live. Here are the writers Im sending it to. 1.KingKakashi 2.Chrisdz 3.Dragon6 4.Elredar Skylance 5.Freedom Guard 6.Hung Nguyen 7.Scribe of the Apocalypse 8.VFSNAKE 9.The Fifth Rider of Armageddon 10.Kyuubi123 11.Frequent Reader 12.PsychoG 13.Ackdam 14.Lord of the Land Of Fire 15.Snafu the Great IF all writers would like to they can make Haku male or female. Me I would keep him male but its cool. NARUTO PAIRINGS I LIKE Naruto/Hinata Naruto/Shion Naruto/Amaru Naruto/Yugito Naruto/Koyuki Naruto/Haruna Naruto/Anko Naruto/Toki Naruto/Yakumo Naruto/Shizune Naruto/Tsunade NARUTO PAIRINGS I DISLIKE Naruto/Sakura Naruto/Samui Naruto/Hanabi Naruto/Tsume Naruto/Yoshino NARUTO PAIRINGS I'M NEUTRAL WITH Naruto/Ten-Ten Naruto/Temari Naruto/Yugao Naruto/Kurenai Naruto/Hana Naruto/Ino NARUTO PAIRINGS I HATE Naruto/Kushina Naruto/Minato Naruto/Sasuke Naruto/Karui Naruto/Yaoi Rictor's Thoughts It has come to my attention and one of my friends and fellow authors has told me that this site we all know and love is wanting to remove story's that have adult content and violence on it because of a certain restriction. I have been a member of this site for eight years and I have enjoyed story's that have giving me inspiration to become a novelist and create my own manga someday. Anyway I feel like we are being denied our right to express our imagination and creativity on this site since this should be a place where we can express ourselves and show our creativity. Who knows we may inspire future novelist and movie script writers with our work in case we never get the chance to get it out ourselves. If anyone feels this way then let voice out your opinion's and shares this with everyone. Stand up for your story's and do not be denied your right to be creative and share your imagination. I know these people are with me and I will copy and paste these people from The Fifth Rider of Armageddon. 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If you want FanFiction to bring back the MA rating, copy this, put it in your profile, and add you name to the list. Rictor Yagami R.I.P. Dungeon Fighter Online: June 9, 2010-June 13, 2013. I will miss this game greatly in the USA. Welcome to my very own rant section that was inspired by Leaf Ranger Rant 1: Naruto Shippuden The Movie 6:Road 2 Ninja. Back in April I saw this movie as I was trying to see the first Naruto Shippuden movie on YouTube, but I settled for this one instead, though it was in English sub. I will admit this was a good movie as it had great action and it did make me cry a few times with those moments of Naruto being with his parents but to be honest there were things about the movie I didn't like and outright hated, and I will begin with the first thing. The first thing I want to rant about is who was made the Fourth Hokage in the alternate reality of that movie and I find it to be the stupidest idea Kishimoto has ever done! Who he made as the Fourth Hokage was a new character that was introduced and it was Sakura’s father Kizashi Haruno. Really Kishimoto you had to pick this guy?! I’m wondering why the hell Kishimoto didn't just use one of the other characters who have been in the series longer to be the Fourth Hokage instead of just some new guy? To me I find it stupid and there were plenty of people to take the part like Hiashi Hyuga, or even one of the fathers from the original Ino-Shika-Cho Trio could have been Hokage. Hell even Orochimaru since it was supposed to be an alternate reality. Now that I think about it even Sasuke’s father would have fit the bill. And now I get to another reason I rant about the movie which is Sakura. And to be honest I am starting to see why a lot of people hate her as in the movie she was completely shallow about Naruto’s feelings being there and it showed her as nothing more than a spoiled brat, not to mention self-centered as well. The thing is Naruto wanted to return back to his reality instead of staying in this one because he knew were he belonged and hated Tobi for pulling this crap with his feelings. But Sakura on the other hand was selfish and didn’t want to leave since her parents were not around in this world and it also showed how she doesn't want to work for the things she wanted like being famous in her village and getting respect from her peers and the people. Then there was also the fact that Sasuke was still in the village, even though it wasn’t the Sasuke she and Naruto had teamed up with. That right there just shows how petty, shallow, and selfish she is. But then all of sudden because the Sasuke of that world is nothing but a playboy and now she only knows for a little bit on how Naruto feels about not having parents she wants to go back to her world. Hell the only reason she was with Naruto to begin with was to get away from her parents and even at the end claimed it was a date when in fact it wasn't. Really now Sakura? In all honesty if Kishimoto just wanted to have it were Sakura actually understood what it was like for Naruto to have no parents, he could of just have it were her parents died fighting the Kyuubi like Iruka’s parents did instead of making her father the Fourth Hokage because in all honesty that was just dumb. Or better yet Sakura should have NEVER been with Naruto in that reality to begin with since Tobi or should I say Obito wanted to capture Naruto for Kurama. This could have shown Naruto’s determination and even his will-power to not be fooled or succumb to his weakness like he did to gain full control of Kurama’s chakra. The next thing I want to rant about the movie is Iruka and to be honest I hated him in this movie for what he said about Naruto having to be a Chunin first in order to be a Jonin. In all honesty Iruka or even Tsunade could have acted as a guardian for Naruto since Jiraiya was gone and one of those two could have recommended him for Jonin but no Iruka had to go through some bullshit excuse about protocol rules and every other crap about him not being able to be a Jonin. Really now, especially after all he has done for not only his village but for the many other countries that he has saved over the series? If anything I am pretty sure the places that Naruto has been to that the many leaders and shinobi’s he meet would recommend to Tsunade that Naruto should be made Chunin or even Jonin. Yes Iruka did apologize in the end but he still shouldn’t have made excuses because of rules in the system. To me Naruto has more than earned the rank Jonin and I will rant about that at a later time. And the last thing about the movie that ticks me off is the fact that Sakura being shown Naruto’s parents and I believe Iruka knows now, and if I were to bet everyone now knows who Naruto’s parents are but no one seems to care and I’m like what the fuck? You would think that after learning who Naruto’s parents are that everyone would be in shock and awe and would want to see him I don’t know, get treated better or even allow him to be promoted after all the shit he had to put up with while growing up alone? There is also the fact I wanted to see what Kushina could do since she was said to be a kick ass ninja and Kishimoto couldn't just show that? It just bugs me greatly. Well that is all for my first rant and I will have another up soon, until next time everyone! Rant 2: The Majin Buu Saga, Update I will be honest with everyone on this website. I loved watching Dragon Ball Z as it was one of the best animes I ever seen and it had some kick ass fight scenes. The only Saga I didn’t get to see was the Cell Saga because the TV channel on Fox stopped showing it afterword’s and I didn’t get to see a lot of the other episodes. But then when I found Toonami I was able to see it again and it was around the middle of the Majin Buu series were Vegeta blew himself up to kill him but failed. And this was years ago back in 2001 or 2002. Then when I started watching more of the episodes I missed I honestly found this arch to be complete and other crap. There was a review I read online before though I forgot who wrote it and he pointed out some things I agreed with. Not all but some. For one thing Gohan becoming the Great Saiyaman as a superhero and I have to admit this was corny and stupid. Gohan had to keep his identity under wraps after the Cell Games which is understandable but he shouldn’t have had to dress like this and act like some cheesy one sided comic book character. He could have had Bulma give him an outfit like the one Vegeta wore and go Super Saiyan so no one would recognize him. That would have been enough. Another thing about the saga is Goku coming back to life when he didn’t want to be brought back to life before at the end of the Cell Games since Gohan could have carried on protecting the Earth. They could have brought him back another time like during Dragon Ball Super. The next thing that bugs me and I hate this guy with a passion like a bunch of other characters. Hercule Satan. This pompous asshole goes taking the credit from Gohan who saved the world and then goes on about some bullshit saying that the Z Fighters and Cell were using special effects to do what they did and what’s worst is the people of Earth buy this bullshit. Is everyone really that stupid? Hercule is nothing but a worthless character and a coward and honestly I wish he was exposed for the fake ass hero he is and even killed off from the series. I’m sorry to any fans of this guy but he is nothing but a delusional idiot and he reminds me of other stupid characters that are too long to list. The next thing that was crappy about the Buu Saga was the use of fusion and honestly what was the point of it? All it did was just drag on the series with pointless fights and Gotenks was annoying in my view being cocky, arrogant and stupid. I’ll admit I liked the fusion Goku and Vegeta did with the magic earrings was cool but it just got boring afterwards. Then there was Trunks and Goten being able to go Super Saiyan without any trouble? Seriously I don’t know if Akira Toriyama was just being lazy or what but I remember that to unleash the Super Saiyan stage you have to feel a great deal of rage to unlock it like how Goku did back on Piccolo’s home planet. And to be honest I was greatly disappointed with how the saga ended and it was really lame. I’m not saying Dragon Ball Z sucked after this, but it was just really annoying on how Majin Buu kept dying and coming back even after all that happened. In my honest opinion it should have ended when Gohan gained his accession from the Supreme Kai and all he had to do was go Super Saiyan after Buu absorbed Gotenks. Hell Gohan might have even achieved Super Saiyan Three after getting a power up from the Supreme Kai, but instead it just kept on going till Goku used a Spirit Bomb to beat him. The fact of the matter is the Majin Buu Saga was way too long and it got boring after so many episodes and I am sure there are plenty of other people who feel the same way. Well this is it for this short and updated rant and I’ll be going back to my work soon. Until next time everyone. Rant 3: Anime Filler Arcs What is an anime filler arc? I have always wondered about it when I decided to look it up out of curiosity to learn what it means and this is what I found on . Filler episodes are entries in a generally continuous serial that are unrelated to the main plot, don’t significantly alter the relations between the characters, and generally serve only to take up space. In other words they are anime episodes that overtake the manga. The point I want to make on this rant is at one time I had no problem with filler episodes when I was watching Bleach on YouTube.com years ago when they didn’t translate all the other episodes and I enjoyed the Bount Arch since it made sense after the Rescue Arch since the chapters for the manga were not translated yet. But sadly there was one anime arch in Bleach that I hated and it made me lose interest in watching Bleach for a while and it was The New Captain Shusuke Amagai Arch. It was just after episode 167 of the series that all of a sudden they left the plot at Hueco Mundo Arch unfinished and just started showing this and I was like what the hell is this? After about three episodes I decided not to watch Bleach anymore and just stick with the manga for a while because this made me lose interest.If anything they should have just made The New Captain Arch into an OVA like they did with the Sealed Sword Frenzy that I saw. Afterword’s I started learning about anime fillers in Bleach that were completely pointless and I wish were never created as it took up space and there is a lot more chapters in the manga that could have been made but never will. The episode arcs I found pointless and stupid were the Beast Sword Arch and the Gotei 13 Invasion Army Arc since they could have just done the Zanpakuto Rebellion Arc after the Decide Arc since it would have made sense to me anyway. Now Bleach is not the only series that has anime fillers since there is another that has a lot WORST anime fillers that definitely takes up too much space and it is Naruto Shippuden. Now this had WAY too many anime filler arcs that they didn't need and I found some of them stupid. I never saw them but I read about them and the first one I want to start off with is the History of Konoha filler arc. Honestly this was absolutely pointless and should have never been made since all it did was make a lot of people angry as they wanted to see what came next after episode 175 since they could have made more episodes from the manga. The Yondaime Treasure arc didn't need to be made as well but the one I hated most was the Chikara Force Arc as it was completely pointless and stupid plus the characters were a total waste of time, and it was the same with the Konoha History episodes as well. As for the Adventure at Sea Arch I really wish they didn’t make that many episodes as some were dumb in my view and took up too much time for the series. I could go on and on but I’m sure you guys get the idea. Well that is it for this rant and I hope this helps get my creative juices flowing again as I am in a stump but real life is a pain in the ass. Until next time everyone. Rant 4: Naruto still as a Genin. You are probably wondering on what got me started on this rant? Well to be honest it began about two years ago around when the fifth Naruto Shippuden movie came out, along with the OVA to it and it was called Chunin Exam On Fire! Naruto vs. Konohamaru! I read about the OVA and to be honest I hated it along with the fifth Naruto Shippuden movie. The reason I hated the OVA is because on how Konohamaru won it and I considered it total B.S. and if Kishimoto was trying to be funny he did a very poor job like with what he’s been doing with the manga lately. In all honesty Naruto shouldn't even be a Genin anymore as he has done countless good deeds throughout the series and has more than earned the right to be a Chunin, or better yet a Jonin! I mean come on Shikamaru made Chunin and he is a lazy bastard at times! There is also the fact that the rest of the Konoha 11 got a promotion to Chunin or even Jonin and yet Naruto isn’t allowed to be promoted on his return from his three year training trip with Jiraiya? Give me a break! I have to agree with Leaf Rangers sixth rant about the training trip that Naruto took with Jiraiya and saw that it did more harm than good for Naruto since he pointed out on how Jiraiya could have still trained him in Konoha giving that there was the Forest of Death they could have used. Not only that Naruto would have been more in danger while traveling with Jiraiya since the moron gets distracted easily from women and has never trained Naruto in much of anything. Hell in Konoha he could have asked Kakashi, Iruka, and even Anko to help Naruto when he had to leave for his spy network, plus it would have giving Naruto a chance to be in the Chunin Exams again. But other than that Naruto could have earned his promotion from all the places he’s been to and has helped save from missing-nins or even corrupt leaders. I can start off with the mission to Wave Country were Naruto learned his nindo from when he fought Zabuza and Haku and the people of that country named a bridge after him! Then we get to when he was with Jiraiya in searching for Tsunade to become the next Hokage and he was almost killed on that mission but he survived it and that could have giving him the promotion. Hell he even helped out three female daimyo’s for crying out loud and he helped changed them for the better! I’m talking about Koyuki from the first Naruto movie and Toki and Haruna from the anime filler arches. Then there was the shinobi village in Bear Country, Hoshigakure in which he defeated the leader there. There was even the mission in which he saved Gaara from the ninja group called the Shitenshounin from Takumi village. I could go on and on but the greatest deed Naruto did was defeat Nagato when he attacked Konoha and Naruto defeated him saving everyone and Nagato used a jutsu to bring back everyone to life when he took the souls of Shizune and many others. I know that Naruto isn't perfect but he has done a lot to earn the title of Jonin and I can only think of three missions he has failed though it was not intentional. The first mission in whom he was part of the Sasuke Retrieval team and the only reason that mission was a failure is because Naruto made that stupid promise to Sakura which caused him to hold back against Sasuke even though that bastard had every intention of killing Naruto. If Naruto never made that promise to her I’m sure the mission would have been a success. The second mission was with the Bikochu Beetle and what happen on that mission was an accident as it’s not like Naruto couldn't control his bodily functions and he didn’t mean for it to happen. And the third mission was the Bounty Hunter Arch when Naruto, Hinata, and Kiba let Sazanami go since he was wrongfully accused of murder. These are the only three missions that come to mind that Naruto has failed and these shouldn't hold him back from being either Chunin or Jonin. I honestly wish things were different from the canon in the series since after everything Naruto has done he deserves to be a Jonin and not stuck as Genin and I’m pretty sure all the people he has helped would have sent recommendations to Tsunade for him to be promoted. And that is it for this rant as I needed to get it off my chest and help me get creative. Until next time everyone! Rant Five: The Sharingan and the Uchiha Clan. You I know I never hated the Sharingan before, as when I first saw and learned about it from the Naruto series I was neutral toward it and found it kind of cool as it had a simple ability or ability’s. But after what’s being going on in the Naruto series I have come to hate it and the ridiculous power up it’s been getting. So let us review on what we knew about it from the beginning shall we? The Sharingan was a doujutsu that had the ability to copy any jutsu that it saw and is what made the Uchiha Clan feared. The only time it couldn't copy was by other clan members who had unique doujutsu’s like the Hyuga Clan or the Kaguya Clan, along with Haku’s clan, the Yuki Clan. Another thing is the user had to have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements in order to perform the jutsu that it copied. Then we learned that in order to unlock the Sharingan that the user had to be in an emotional stress in the heat of battle, like a life or death situation. Then we learned that by having at least two tomoe’s will be allowed to pierce genjutsu and see the surrounding area for what it really is. With three tomoe’s it can give the user to see an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension. This also grants the user to use genjutsu and hypnotize its enemy after just locking eyes with an enemy. Sounds like a powerful enough doujutsu right? But then we learn there is an evolved form to the Sharingan and it is known as the Mangekyou Sharingan but there is a catch to achieving this. In order to do so you have to kill your closest friend. What kind of new ability’s do you gain from it? Well the first one is the Tsukuyomi which give an Uchiha a very powerful genjutsu. By making eye contact with the user has its enemy trapped in their mind and is subjected to being tortured by the user. And while only being in the illusionary world for a few seconds, to them it feels like they have been tortured for days. Though there is a drawback to using the Tsukuyomi as it puts a strain on the user and cannot be used extensively. The next ability that is gained is called Amaterasu. This is a ninjutsu technique that gives its user the ability to use powerful black flames and anything in its path will be burned to ashes and the fire is so powerful it will burn for seven days and seven nights. However it can only be used on a very limited daily basis because the strain on it can cause one to go blind. Now I figure those kind of power ups should have been good enough and I’m sure everyone else thinks so as well, but unfortunately Kishimoto just had to ruin it by being a troll and making the Sharingan even more powerful when he didn't have to and just ruined it. What did he do? Well for one thing he then added another technique to the Mangekyou Sharingan called Susanoo in which the user is now covered by a fired specter that wields a sword or bow and is powerful enough to seal away someone or slice a mountain in half. And get this; it gives the user protection as well to prevent being harmed. Then we get yet ANOTHER power up for it and this time it is a technique known as Kotoamatsuki in which it can control the minds and opinions of others without the victims knowing about it! And get this no direct eye contact is needed so long as the user is within the vicinity. Now that should have been the end of it for the Sharingan but then it gets more power ups which is just plain out stupid! The next one we see is a jutsu called Izanagi in which it grants the user the ability to turn wounds and disadvantages into nothing more than a dream! It also makes attacks and advantageous maneuvers real, thus giving one complete control over their own reality through an illusion cast on themselves. The only good news about this is that it will cause the user to lose their vision forever. But are we done yet, oh no! Kishimoto has once again decided to make another stupid power up which this doujutsu didn't need but he decided to give it away anyway! And this jutsu is known as Izanami! And what does this one do? Well it is a genjutsu that causes the users enemy to be trapped in an illusion like world were the victim is stuck in repeating the same event again and again. The only way to escape this technique is by acknowledge the results of their actions and in doing so, accept their fate. I could go on and on about what other bullshit techniques this has but I rather not as it’s annoying and would just make me want to hurl all over myself. Now I thought that the Sharingan was done evolving and that would have been the end of it, unfortunately it wasn’t the end as Kishimoto did yet another stupid power up which makes absolutely no sense to me or anyone else. What he did next was have the Mangekyou Sharingan evolve again and this time into the Rinnegan? Okay wasn’t the Rinnegan supposed to be a doujutsu that belonged to the Uzumaki Clan? What’s worse is that Madara Uchiha is able to summon meteors and launch them at his enemies. Then we get to the history of the Uchiha Clan in general which Kishimoto decided to fuck up by messing up its root of origin. On episode 46 of Naruto in which Kakashi said that the Uchihas are said to be descendants of the Hyuga Clan, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. How did he screw this up? Well we then learn later on that both the Senju and the Uchiha Clans ancestors were the sons of the Rikkudo Sannin who wield the Rinnegan. So does that mean the Hyuga, Senju, Uchiha and the Uzumaki’s are related together in some way? This doesn’t help me at all as it only confuses me more. But that is not the end of it. No the most stupid thing that was done once again and it had to do with Chapter 619 of the manga. King Kakashi said it best in his rant about that chapter. The thing is that all of a sudden the Uchiha Clan is a bunch of lovey-dovey hippies that if they lose the feelings of love and friendship that going through anguish and despair causes them to awaken their Sharingan? Just what the hell is this crap? Okay if the Uchiha Clan valued friendship and love, then why the hell go through an attempt to overthrow the Hokage? Are we supposed to feel sorry for them? Chapter 619 was without a doubt the biggest piece of crap I ever read. For a better explanation on this chapter see King Kakashi’s rant of the manga on Chapter 59 of his story Naruto vs. Sasuke: The Aftermath. Anyway do you see where I am going with this rant? Kishimoto just contradicted everything about the Sharingan and the Uchiha clan. It went from a simple doujutsu that copied other jutsu’s to an overpowered and ridiculous doujutsu which didn’t need to become any more powerful than it already was. Honestly he could have giving an upgrade to the other shinobi clans of the series like the Senju, they Hyuga’s, the Inuzuka’s, the Aburame’s, the Akimichi’s, and even the Uzumaki’s. Well that is it for this rant as I needed to blow off some steam and get this off my chest. I’ll try to update my stories when I can as real life is frustrating. Until next time everyone! Rant Six: Kumogakure and The Raikage A. I bet you are wondering on what started this rant? Well I am going to be blunt with everyone; I hate the Raikage A and almost everyone in Kumogakure. The only exception is Killer B and Yugito Nii since their Jinchuuriki’s. My reason for hating A and those who live in Kumo may sound biased but to me it’s my opinion and I feel the need to share it. But if you are a fan of Kumo and don’t like this rant than do not read it, but if you are interested than feel free. Anyway here is one reason I hate them. To me they are nothing but a bunch of self-absorbed, power hungry assholes that act like they can take whatever they want and think that they are above everyone else. Why do I call them power hungry? I should also add selfish because that is what they are and here is why. Many authors on this site point out that they are part of the cause for the downfall of Uzushiokagure during probably the Second Great Shinobi World War, and were after the many jutsu’s that Uzushio held but couldn’t get their hands on. Many people might think differently but I’m pretty sure this is accurate. For one thing these are the bastards that kidnapped Naruto’s mother Kushina Uzumaki and were after her for the special chakra she held and she was the second Jinchuuriki for Kurama, the Nine Tailed Fox, and Minato Namikaze, Naruto’s father, thankfully saved her from a fate worse than death. Then there is also the fact that they tried to steal the Byakugan from the Hyuga Clan when the ambassador for Kumo tried to kidnap Hinata but was killed by her father. Then we get the Raikage’s bullshit stating they didn’t try any underhanded tactic and demanded for Hiashi Hyuga’s life or they would go to war with Konohagakure which lead to Neji’s father Hizashi taking his brothers place to avoid war and what led to Neji’s hatred toward Hinata which wasn’t her fault since she was like what four or five years old? How the hell could a kid at that age take on a Jonin? Besides what did they need to pull that crap for when they were already powerful enough as it is? I mean come on they have TWO Jinchuuriki which were the Two Tailed Cat Matatabi and the Eight Tailed Ox/Octopus hybrid Gyuki. And that isn't the end of it, they also had the weapons that belonged to the Sage of Six Path’s which were used by the Gold and Silver brothers, even though those guys turned rough. But was that it? Oh no, they also had the Kekkei Genkai Ranton or Storm Release that is used by Darui. But that’s not enough for them and so they try to pull the crap by kidnapping people? Bastards. Now I get to the Raikage A and he is without a shadow of a doubt the biggest asshole on God’s green Earth. This guy is not only over emotional but is a selfish inconsiderate prick that thinks only of himself and acts like all of Kumo and himself are saints. This guy had the nerve to point out all the mistakes and bad deeds the other Shinobi Villages have done but acts like his village has done nothing wrong. There is also the fact he would kill Bee. Seriously like that would stop the Akatsuki? There is also the fact he is a tight ass control freak and it’s either his way or the highway, even though his ways are wrong most of the ways. Then we get to episode 287 were the Raikage is shown to be an even bigger douchebag concerning Tsunade’s hemophobia which Shizune explains what happen and instead of being understanding and considerate he acts like a dick. The guy has no consideration for others but himself. Yeah whose idea was it to make this douchebag a kage? And now we come to some characters from Kumogakure, namely Team Samui. I honestly don’t like them, well maybe I’m neutral toward Omoi but that might change. As far as I’m concerned these guys are basically a clone of Konohagakure’s Team 7. We got Samui who is like a female version of Sasuke, though she is more along the lines a replacement of Kurenai Yuhi and we got Karui a flat chest with a short temper like Sakura and Omoi who is supposed to be like Naruto, a dense headed fool. But then again the guy has got some skills so I can give him props for that. C and Darui I honestly can’t hate them as much but they could have been developed more, along with Yugito and many other characters. Look I’m not going to tell you to start hating everyone in Kumogakure. If you like the characters then that’s cool, but if you don’t like them then it’s fine. Well that’s it for this rant as I needed to do this to get creative and share how I felt. I’ll try to get some writing done. Until next time everyone! Rant Seven: Devil May Cry Reboot. I've been meaning to get started on this rant for some time now but haven’t had the time for it. But now I have the time because I am suffering from writers block for my stories. So without further ado let’s get started on this rant and I apologize to everyone if I say anything offensive. I am a big fan of the Devil May Cry series and I have all four of the games. I played them and beat them which were very fun. I was really hoping for a fifth one with either Dante, or Nero, or even Vergil to make a return to the series along with Lucia. But sadly as it was not to be as a few years ago I was checking out a video game magazine and that is when I saw the picture of Dino or as everyone call’s him Dante In Name Only. When I read that it was the new Devil May Cry and that it was a reboot I was like what the fuck? What the hell is Capcom even thinking? When I saw the picture of this emo-twilight reject I knew then and there that this reboot was going to be a failure and a lot of long time Devil May Cry fans were not going to be happy. That is when I learned that Capcom was allowing another company to have control in making it and the name of this company is called Ninja Theory. You would think that Capcom would learn to never let another company make a video game after Devil May Cry 2. Don’t get me wrong I enjoyed playing it but it didn’t have the same feeling as the first Devil May Cry game and the third and fourth game was way better. That is when I saw an interview with Ninja Theory’s Tameem Antoniadis and what this guy said just really ticked me off and he is without a doubt the biggest asshole ever and is a total flamer. He is ugly and gay and I would give anything to whip his ass for the comments he made. This douchebag had the nerve to say he didn’t care what the fans think or even he sold a thousand copies. Seriously who does this loser think he is? He should care what the fans think because that’s where he gets his money! Then this jackass decided to talk crap about the original Dante about his looks and character saying he wasn’t cool. Hey jackass you wouldn’t know what cool way if it went up and kicked you right between the legs with your gay ass. Then we get to the new Dante and honestly I know and everybody else knows it that Tameem based the new Dante to look like his ugly ass and make him all emo looking. They even changed his personality and I hated it! Plus they made him swear and smoke? Give me a break, the original Dante was too cool to smoke! And that’s not the worst of it. They changed the background story and history of Dante and his family. His mother an angle and his father a demon? What is this Little Nicky? And Vergil looks like some kind of Ken Barbie doll and using guns? Really? Then we get to Mundus and the guy looks like a &* reject of Marvel comics the Kingpin. That’s not even the worst of it, those idiots at Ninja Theory start mixing in a bunch of crap from other video games series and movies like Dino going into limbo. Seriously when did this become Persona 3 with the dark hour? And the sword Rebellion looks like a rejected version of Nero’s sword and don’t even get me started with the guns that are supposed to be Ebony and Ivory. Then we get to the game play which I saw on YouTube when it was in development and it is the worst piece of crap I ever seen! Seriously they took out the targeting system and the stylish system which was the stupidest idea ever! Then I read one review on and I agree with what the reviewer wrote especially from what this one idiot Robin Reiker quoted and she said this. “Lilith, Mundus, Vergil, Dante and Kat are all kind of archetypical characters-almost Shakespearean in the theme” Seriously what kind of drugs is this idiot on? There is nothing Shakespearean about Dante and Lilith saying fuck you to each other repeatedly. And I am not the only one who is disgusted by this crap. All in all I will NEVER play this piece of garbage or even count it among the Devil May Cry series EVER! Whew, that felt good! And to top it off go to YouTube to check out EventStatus’s video’s, but there are some swears to his video just to give everyone the heads up and he will share what I learned from him about the crap made from Ninja Theory and other news in video games. Well that is all for now as I needed to vent and share my opinion about what I believe to be the worst reboot in history. Until next time everyone and Merry Christmas! Rant Eight: Naruto with the Sharingan. (Authors Note: This isn't much of a rant, more like a personal opinion of mine.) Okay I have seen story’s were Naruto gains a Kekkei Genkai or a Dojutsu either from birth or through other kinds of means. Like Haku’s Ice ability’s from the Yuki Clan or the Mokuton that was from the Senju Clan. Or ones that were created by the author or are in the form of a crossover like Bleach and other manga series, even video games. I don’t mind it but there is one that I honestly don’t like and think it is stupid. Naruto with the Sharingan. After sharing my extreme dislike for it and the Uchiha I find the idea of Naruto being in possession of it to be rather stupid. I mean come on what does he need it for when he has the Kage Bushin no Jutsu? Do people forget about the ability that jutsu has? If anything the Sharingan is just a hack for the Uchiha who honestly don’t want to put in the effort to actually learn jutsus and just copy it. And the ridiculous upgrades it had gotten through out the series was just plain stupid. Besides Naruto can become a total bad ass without it. There is one story that I will make as an exception which is in my favorites. That will be it for this rant as I needed to vent a little and clear my head because I've been having some trouble with my story's. Until next time everyone. Rant Nine: The Ending to the Naruto manga. I don’t mean to beat over a dead horse, as I figure that everyone must have ranted about the ending to Naruto for whatever reasons. My friend KingKakashi shared his thoughts on his authors note so I figured I share it on one of my rants so without delay let’s get started, yay! I’ll start with the conclusion on the final fight between Naruto and Sasuke in were it ended with both of them losing an arm and Sakura coming to heal them. There was also the fact that Sasuke being the stupid douche that he is wanted to take control of the Biju and destroy the other Shinobi villages and recreate one in his image, which makes him an idiot. Naruto isn’t going to let him and Sakura being the usual naïve love sick school girl is upset with Sasuke, and he puts her in a genjutsu to shut her up. Anyway after the battle Kakashi has become the sixth Hokage and what happens afterwards is bullshit. Sasuke despite everything he had done is giving nothing but a slap on the wrist! Seriously Kishimoto I get this is your favorite character but come on this is ridiculous! Sasuke should have faced life imprisonment or even execution. There is no excuse for him to get off scot free just because he is Sasuke Uchiha. What pisses me off even more is the fact that Neji remained dead, along with Ino’s dad and even Shikamaru’s dad, along with several others. If anything I wish that the Raikage was dead instead, along with Kabuto. Onoki I would even understand considering the guy is well past his prime. We now fast forward to several years where Naruto and the others have grown up, and some of them have kids of their own. I am happy that Naruto and Hinata got together while having two kids, but there is one thing that bothers me with it. Naruto is hardly there for his family and spends more time working. I get that he has a village to run but come on you would think being an orphan your whole life you would want to be with family more often and he could have his Shadow Clones doing the paperwork, instead of having them go to his family. Shikamaru and Temari got married and have a kid as well which the kid takes after his father. And to no surprise Sakura and Sasuke got married and even had a kid their selves. But the emo avenger is never around for them since he is doing some wandering to find himself in traveling. What bothers me about this is that their daughter isn’t being treated with ridicule and disgust concerning who her father is as it would make sense. Come on if people gave Naruto a hard time growing up, than Sakura’s daughter should be no exception and it would make sense. Plus Naruto’s family would be there to help since Naruto still considers Sasuke a friend, even though the jerk doesn’t deserve it. Also their daughter doesn’t look ANYTHING like Sakura; she looks more like Karin for crying out loud! But there are two pairing that piss me off and one of them is a poor joke from Kishimoto. Choji is paired with Karui and Ino is paired with Sai. Seriously Kishimoto, are you on drugs or just stupid? Ino should have been giving better development and she wouldn’t still be some shallow bimbo that only likes pretty boys. If anything it would have made more sense to pair her with Choji, considering he’s known her longer and cares for her. But pairing Choji with that bitch Karui? That is stupid considering their names mixed together would mean light-weight. And the nonsense doesn’t stop there, oh no! Anko one of the sexist women of the series became a fat pig! I want to punch Kishimoto in the face right now! While I am glad she is not dead but to make her like that? Kishimoto I know you got a thing for big women but don’t be a dick, and what’s worse you didn’t make Kurenai age well and you could have at least brought Asuma back to life to be there for his wife and kid! I also learn that Lee has a son, but once again Kishimoto decides to be a troll and not even tell who the mother is. For all we know it could be Ten-Ten. But what bothers me the most is that Orochimaru and even Kabuto are still alive instead of being dead. Seriously these two bastards don’t deserve to live considering all the crimes they have done, especially Orochimaru. And the biggest bullshit is that there is a bunch of Uchiha clones. There shouldn’t even be anymore Uchiha to begin with, and should have been just Sasuke and Sarada and whatever kids she has in the future. VFSNAKE had said it best in one of his story’s, those eyes are a danger to everyone in the elemental nations, not just the Biju, everyone. Seriously Kishimoto did you forget what Obito did to the Fourth Mizukage who caused a civil war? Did you forget what it did to Konoha considering it cost Naruto a family? Sasuke even used it on Sakura. Besides there is always a chance someone would want to use the Sharingan to control others like Danzo tried to do and any new Uchiha would unintentionally or intentionally would try to unlock the next level of that stupid eye! Kishimoto I did enjoy Naruto, I really did but you barely did any character development and all the anime fillers are getting tiring and stupid. You basically turned a great series into shit, just like Tite Kubo did with Bleach. I don’t think he should even write the Boruto series considering how his series and movies turned out. And that is it for this rant as I will be going back to working on my stories. Until next time everyone. Rant Ten: RWBY Volume 4 and 5. I'll be honest I didn't know anything about RWBY, that is until I saw an episode of Death Battle on YouTube and it was one of my favorite hotties Tifa Lockhart vs Yang Xiao Long. I was ticked off that Tifa lost since I'm a fan of Final Fantasy 7, but anyway I thought that RWBY was another video game series. It wasn't until in the New Year around 2016 that I decided to check it out and was shocked to find out it was an anime series. I didn't see the trailer clips as I started watching episode one of season one and it just blew my mind away and I loved it! I especially liked Ruby, Yang and Blake, but I didn't like Weiss as she was a real bitch, not to mention an obnoxious spoiled brat but as I watched more of the show I learned more about her though she shouldn't act like that because she has daddy issues. Then I saw Pyrrha, Jaune, Nora and Lie Ren. Pyrrha I liked as she was an awesome character and I liked her and Jaune was okay as he had that underdog mentality though I wish he didn't act like a fan boy trying to win Weiss's affection as I honestly didn't know what he saw in her. I didn't like Nora as I found her to be annoying, obnoxious and stupid but she grew on me later. Ren was the cool silent type and...sorry I can't remember what else. Anyway I could go on about more characters I enjoyed or hate but that's not what this rant is about as it is about Volumes 4 and 5 of the series. After I had watched the first three seasons I was sad to learn that the original creator of RWBY Monty Oum had died in 2015 which sucks as he was young and I wish he was still around. I even hated how Pyrrha died in the season three finally and what happen to Yang as well with what happen to Penny and I hate Cinder! When I checked out Volume 4 I thought it was okay though it wasn't as exciting as the other three seasons. As I was waiting on Volume 5 I had decided to watch the trailers and all four seasons again and to be honest I didn't like Volume 4 as much and found it boring. I soon saw Volume 5 and looking back on it after watching all the episodes and previews, I just found it boring and I hate to say it terrible. I had even watched a review video about it on YouTube from a reviewer named Urban The Myth and he pointed some things out I never noticed and I wish I did. For one thing Ruby went from a cool main protagonist to a boring background character. It felt the same with how some of my other favorite characters like Blake and Yang came out, even Jaune and the others. Not only that it didn't have the same fast paced action like it did in the beginning of the series as it became too slow passed but the story plot just felt like a big mess too. I even watched some video's from another reviewer on YouTube who is named Cake and he pointed some stuff out too in which he made video's concerning how Monty used rhythm, poses, character and the Rule Of Cool. But the biggest surprise was when I read Shane Newville's letter and it took me a while to read all thirty six pages. This guy was a friend to Monty and he poured his heart and soul into this letter and I couldn't help but feel for him, along with Monty's wife Sheena. I couldn't help but be disgusted toward those who worked at Rooster Teeth and to be honest I'm not even going to watch Volume 6 as I saw the trailer to it and found it boring. Hell I don't even like the animation they are using as I liked the original version better. Plus the fight scenes have become stale and lame, and the story plot is just becoming awful. Many of the original characters just don't have the same spark and what brought me to love them. Hell I even wish Volume 3 had a different ending like instead of Yang losing her arm she could have went through something like Terry Bogard did in the second Fatal Fury anime movie when he lost to Wolfgang Krauser. Pyrrha could have ended up in a coma instead of dying. Look I'm not telling you to stop watching RWBY or even hate it, if you love the show then that's fine and I still like RWBY but with how Volume 5 turned out I have no desire to see the sixth season as it doesn't have that same feeling that made me enjoy anymore. I just wanted to share my opinion and get this rant out of the way. I'll be trying to write another chapter for my story's now and make sure to check out the video's of the reviewers I named if you are interested as they gave out some good detail. Until Next Time everyone. Rant Eleven: The Wonderbolts I guess you are surprised to see me write a rant about My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic. A friend of mine and fellow writer Frequent Reader does some artwork at Deviant Art and one of his artworks got me hooked on to the series as I watched Equestria Girls Rainbow Rocks and it was hearing one of the songs for that movie that got me to check it out. Since then I watched a lot of episodes of MLP and read some fan fiction on it to. There were a lot of characters I loved and it sadden me to see the series end. But there were a lot of characters I also hated on that show and I have a top ten list to myself and on that list is the Wonderbolts. Who are the Wonderbolts? The answer to that is they are one of Equestria's military factions who are supposed to be based on the United States Air Force the Thunderbirds as well as the United States Navy flight demonstration team the Blue Angels. They were formed over a thousand years ago when Princess Luna was banished to the moon by Princess Celestia. They are considered to be the best fliers in Equestria and are supposed to be used as a line of defense when there is trouble. They also perform several air shows to please the citizens of Ponyville, and Cloudsdale. Rainbow Dash idolizes them as it's been her dream to become a Wonderbolt and perform with them since she was a kid. But in all honesty I hate the Wonderbolts as I consider them to be a group of useless idiot's and are an embarrassment to any and all military factions in the world, plus Rainbow Dash would be better off without these asshole's considering what happen in the episode Newbie Dash. Many of you are wondering why I think that way about right? Well at first I thought they were cool but after reading some stories on and comments about I have to agree with how useless they are, plus they can be complete idiots. Not to mention I find them to be arrogant and more egotistic then even Rainbow Dash and are petty jerk ass's. I would like to point out some comments made from one reviewer named PhycoKrusk as he made some good points about the kind of pony's they are. The first thing is they failed to do is save Rarity from falling to her death as they went getting knocked out by her and they are supposed to be the best around Cloudsdale which is their home turf and it was Rainbow Dash who ended up saving Rarity along with them. If anything they probably felt stupid and their ego's got hit by being shown up by some pony who wasn't even a Wonderbolt. Then there was the Grand Galloping Gala which they invited her but purposely snub Dash because she wasn't a Wonderbolt. A lot of you may say it's because they are considered celebrities but you would think they would be more considerate to someone who saved their lives. The next issue is they were completely useless to stop Spike when he was being a greedy selfish brat and they ended up getting trapped in a giant sized water tank. When they got free they tried to play it off like it was a part of their plan. Another thing that really pissed me off is that Spitfire, the so called captain of the Wonderbolts did nothing to help the citizens of Ponyville to form a tornado to get water sent to Cloudsdale because she was more concerned with looking at a stop watch. Shit she could have had some members of her team to help out. Then there was the Canterlot Wedding incident in which they were nowhere to be found when the Changelings invaded. Seriously these guys are supposed to be military and they didn't do jack shit to stop these guys? Then we move on to the episode Wonderbolts Academy where Spitfire is very visibly spending more time signing autographs than administrating with the new recruits in the academy. The only time she actually did anything is when Rainbow Dash called her out to do something in removing Lightning Dust for being a reckless jackass in almost injuring everyone. The next problem I have with the Wonderbolts is that they were willing to replace Soarin in the episode of Rainbow Falls which showed they don't know jack shit about loyalty or being a good team mate. Spitfire basically lied to her own teammate just to win a stupid game. But does it end there? Oh no! The Wonderbolts dumb ass's weren't around when a bug bear attacked Ponyville during Cranky and Matilda's wedding! Before I forget there was also the incident where Cerberus had invaded Ponyville. Where the hell where they? Probably cowering in fear somewhere in Cloudsdale. Then we get to when Rainbow Dash is accused of committing a crime she never did in the episode Rarity Investigates where every single one of the Wonderbolts accuse her for Spitfire's disappearance just because Wind Rider say's so and the so called evidence was obviously bullshit. Rarity was the only one with common sense and was able to deduce the truth that it was Wind Rider who committed the crime and all to keep his stupid record. After this shit Rainbow should have said fuck the Wonderbolts or as I like to call these morons the Wonderdolts. I'm even willing to beat the same thing that I read from Madhat886 story Fusion Falls that Wind Rider probably did this more then once and those idiots never bothered to investigate very thoroughly into crimes like the one Wind Rider committed and whoever the new recruit is was giving the boot. But sadly the final straw came for me with the episode Newbie Dash and I honestly wanted to punch that little bitch Misty Fly and kick that asshole Soarin in the nuts. Honestly their whole hazing ritual is just complete and utter bullshit. It wouldn't be out of place in real life but since these losers never do any fighting at all and just put on a bunch of air shows. To quote from Madhat886 story once more, all the Wonderdolts are nothing more then crossing guards as they never do anything against the villains. Hell all they are is a bunch of over glorified sky performers. I apologize to anyone who likes the Wonderbolts but honestly I just hate these guys as they are just as useless as the royal guards in Equestria. Though if I do write a story on this site for a crossover, I won't just needlessly bash them along with other characters I hated on the show, unless I'm bored. Well that's it for this rant and I hope this will help me clear my mind so I can get back to my story's since I haven't written in forever. Been dealing with depression and I pray that everyone is safe because of the COVID-19 crisis going on. Until Next Time everyone. I was walking around in a Target store, when I saw a cashier hand this little boy some money back. The boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years old. The cashier said, "I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll." Then the little boy turned to the old woman next to him: ''Granny, are you sure I don't have enough money?'' The old lady replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy this doll, my dear.'' Then she asked him to stay there for just 5 minutes while she went to look a round. She left quickly. The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand. Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to. "It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much for Christmas. She was sure that Santa Claus would bring it to her." I replied to him that maybe Santa Claus would bring it to her after all, and not to worry. But he replied to me sadly. "No, Santa Claus can't bring it to her where she is now. I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there." His eyes were so sad while saying this. "My sister has gone to be with God. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister.'' My heart nearly stopped. The little boy looked up at me and said: "I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall." Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me "I want mommy to take my picture with her so she won't forget me. I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister." Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly. I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. "Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?'' "OK," he said, "I hope I do have enough." I added some of my money to his without him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough for the doll and even some spare money. The little boy said: "Thank you God for giving me enough money!" Then he looked at me and added, "I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so that mommy could give it to my sister. He heard me!'' "I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose.'' "My mommy loves white roses." A few minutes later, the old lady returned and I left with my basket. I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my mind. Then I remembered a local newspaper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little girl. The little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy? Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the newspaper that the young woman had passed away. I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her burial. She was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest. I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed forever.. The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sister is still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from him. Now you have 2 choices: 1) Repost this message. 2) Ignore it as if it never touched your heart Dear bullies, See that boy doing his homework in home room? Last night he talked His friend out of suicide. See that young boy you had made fun of for always being sick? He has to walk home in the snow cause his family is too poor. The girl you just called fat? She is overdosing on diet pills. The girl you just called ugly? She spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her. The boy you just tripped? He is abused enough at home. See that man with the ugly scars? He fought for his country. That guy you just made fun of for crying? His mother is dying. Put this as you're profile if you're against bullying. I bet 95% of you wont put this on your profile, but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will. At age 8, your dad buys you an ice cream. You thanked him by dripping it all over his lap. When you were 9 years old, he paid for piano lessons. You thanked him by never even bothering to practice. When you were 10 years old he drove you all day, from soccer to football to one birthday party after another. You thanked him by jumping out of the car and never looking back. When you were 11 years old, he took you and your friends to the movies. You thanked him by asking to sit in a different row. When you were 12 years old, he warned you not to watch certain TV shows. You thanked him by waiting until he left the house. When you were 13, he suggested a haircut that was in fashion. You thanked him by telling him he had no taste. When you were 14, he paid for a month away at summer camp. You thanked him by forgetting to write a single letter. When you were 15, he came home from work, looking for a hug. You thanked him by having your bedroom door locked. When you were 16, he taught you how to drive his car. You thanked him by taking it every chance you could. When you were 17, he was expecting an important call. You thanked him by being on the phone all night. When you were 18, he cried at your high school graduation. You thanked him by staying out partying until dawn. When you were 19, he paid for your college tuition, drove you to campus carried your bags. You thanked him by saying good-bye outside the dorm so you wouldn't be embarrassed in front of your friends. When you were 25, he helped to pay for your wedding, and he told you how deeply he loved you. You thanked him by moving halfway across the country. When you were 50, he fell ill and needed you to take care of him . You thanked him by reading about the burden parents become to their children. And then, one day, he quietly died. And everything you never did came crashing down like thunder on your heart. If you love your dad, post this on your profile. When you were 5, your mom gave you an ice-cream cone. You thanked her by yelling at her that it's the wrong kind. When you were 9, your mom drove you from swimming to soccer to soccer and one birthday party to another. You thanked her by slamming the door and never looking back. When you were 10, your mom paid for piano classes. You thanked her by never coming to class. When you were 12, your mom was waiting for a very important call. You thaned her by talking on the phone all night. When you were 14, your mom paid for a month away at summer camp. You thanked her by not bothering to write a single letter. When you were 16, your mom taught you how to drive her car. You thanked her by taking it every chance you got. When you were 18, your mom cried at your high school graduation. You thanked her by partying until dawn. When you were 20, your mom drove you to college. You thanked her by saying goodbye outside the dorm so you wouldn't have to in front of your friends. When you were 26, your mom paid for your wedding. You thanked her by moving halfway across the world. When you were 30, your mom fell ill and needed you to take care of her. You thanked her by reading about the burden parents are to their children. Then on night she died quietly and everything you did came crashing down on you. If you love your mom, copy and paste this in your profile. If you don't, then you won't care if your mom dies, will you? |
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